Josh
Hewitt is an amazing writer. And an amazing friend. He is there for me whenever
I need him, lifts me up, sets me straight. There is simply nothing I would not
do for him. My bestie.
And
of course it is because of him that this project even exists. He was the first
one to ask me to write a short story. It was the first one I ever wrote. And
now I can't stop writing the darn things.
I
have read many things written by this man, and hopefully , if he allows me, I
will continue to read more. The things he writes are brilliant, real, raw, and
emotional. So I was totally ready for a tearjerker when he sent me this story.
And
it wasn't. It was so completely different than anything he ever wrote before.
He was so worried about it. Little could I explain that with his sheer talent,
he had singlehandedly woven together all the parts to this blog series. And he
never knew it.
So
here it is. The man who started it all with the story that completed it all.
Starting everything off. Fitting, don't you think?
"This suitcase is weird. Whenever I put my arm by it, my hairs stand up. It's like what happens when there's static in the air from a storm." Jesse repeatedly waved his arm over the worn leather.
"Shhh. I'm trying to really look at these things. Can you hush it?"
"And do you smell that? It smells like…" Jesse sniffed into the air. "like a burning phone line. Where the hell did this come from?"
The Suitcase
The Suitcase
Both the girl
and the suitcase were unaware they were being watched. For the suitcase, this
was unsurprising, because it was a suitcase and therefore unaware of everything.
But for the girl? Even if she had half a
heart to notice, everything had been just too weird for her to care.
Behind the
glass, five of them stood, watching little Anna Robinson play with a doll,
while the suitcase just sat there. The five observers watched as she picked the
doll up and shook it a bit, then set it back down and started to fix it a
dinner of the finest imaginary food possible.
Agent Donald,
the tallish man in a crisp black suit, looked at the little girl, then turned
his attention to the other four. He pulled a bit at his tie before he spoke.
“As you can
see, she’s an average ten year old girl." He spoke with an air that tried
it’s hardest to be authoritative, but he was very much out of his element here.
Everything about him screamed unimportant government agent, someone who was
nothing more than a replaceable cog in a greater machine, right down to his
bought from Sears tie. The whole is
greater than the sum of its parts--the unofficial motto of the US
Government.
But before
him? This was greatness. These were the parts that were, individually, greater than the whole.
“You four have
been brought here due to your excellence in your field. Professor Einstein?"
He pointed to the short, bald, wild-looking man with a devilish grin on his
face. “Your work with the relativity of time and light speaks for itself.”
He turned to
the lady feverishly jotting notes. “Miss Christie, your novels and mysteries
reveal your ability to plot even the thinnest of clues to the outcome.”
Agent Donald
looked over the bearded man tapping his fingers on his leg. “Mr.
Blackstone? You are the world's greatest
illusionist of this time, and someone who knows things you probably shouldn’t."
Harry just smiled.
Donald looked
over the thin, young man who lovingly cuddled a pipe with his thumb and first
two fingers. “And, Mr. Canterbury. Your work in, shall we say, the darker
regions of science…”
“Doctor." The young man with the pipe responded.
“Doctor." The young man with the pipe responded.
“Excuse me?”
“It’s Doctor
Canterbury. I…” the young man smiled a goofy grin, “I just got my doctorate.”
“Congratulations!"
Einstein screamed with so much excitement, Agent Donald felt the need to grab
his arm. Einstein just laughed merrily. “You shouldn’t be so surly--education
is a most worthwhile goal, yes?”
Agent Donald
nodded, then released his grip. He composed himself.
“So, why are we
here? Your telegraph requested our
services for a—how did you put it? A most 'peculiar case'." Agatha
inflected, never breaking sight of the girl, still furiously writing, as if she
was composing her latest novel off something she saw in the room.
“Yes, that. Well,
in May of 1950...” Agent Donald dug into a file folder, looking frantically,
“Yes, May 18th, Anna Robinson disappeared from her home. She
reappeared four months ago.”
“Doesn’t sound
that peculiar at all." Blackstone commented, a whiff of indigence in his
words.
“Yes, that
doesn’t. Here's a picture of her from before she disappeared." Agent
Donald pulled a small photo from the file and handed it to the other four. They
each took a moment looking at it, then back through the glass. Then back to the
photo. Then, once again, back through the glass.
“She…she’s the
same?" Blackstone lost his indigence. “The same age?”
“Yes. The same
age. The same height. The same everything. She remembered standing on her
parents' porch, then a bright flash of light. She was standing there when her
mother opened up the door. Five years later."
“And the
suitcase?" Canterbury asked.
“It was with
her when she returned. That’s the only variable." Agent Donald placed a
small bit of emphasis on the last word, hoping it would impress Albert. Einstein
smiled at him. “Other than that, she was exactly the same.”
“Excellent. A
variable. Something we can build upon!” Einstein spoke confidently, and with
enough enthusiasm to start Harry shaking his head.
“No, no. Any
good magician knows that it’s the art of misdirection. The suitcase is to keep
us from looking at the facts.”
“I would say it
would most definitely be a clue." Christie offered up, finally having put
her pencil down.
“I think it’s a
suitcase." Canterbury lit his pipe and took a small drag off of it. The
others chuckled.
“I think our
young friend might be right." Einstein laughed. Agent Donald even smiled a
bit, glad the tension had waned. “So, a girl disappears. She reappears five
years later with a mysterious suitcase, not having aged a day." He slowly
looked at the four of them. “How?”
“Easy. This is
a con." Blackstone spoke in a whisper, drawing his audience near. “Yes, a
very elaborate one. Obviously, this girl hasn’t been missing for five years. They
aged the photo, and set about falsifying documents. Then, this fantastic story—the
girl who disappeared for five years, but didn’t age a day. The newspapers will
clamor for it! The money will practically print itself. Everyone will buy a
copy. Then a book!”
“But, why the
suitcase?" Agatha asked, her accent in full lilt.
“Easier
still! Like I said—basic misdirection. May
I see your pencil?" Miss Christie handed it to him. “I show you this
pencil, and wiggle it in my fingers. It looks like rubber. And I tell you it is
made of rubber. Then I do this."
He held the pencil between the palms of his hands, long ways, and with one
smooth and quick motion, folded the pencil in half, his hands meeting with a
loud clap. When he opened them, the pencil was gone.
“Astounding!’ Einstein started to clap. “It’s magic!”
“You focused on
the pencil, and what you perceived was its bending in half. But before you
could process what happened, the clap broke your thought." He gently pulled
his left hand across his right, revealing the pencil back in the palm of his
hand. “Misdirection. We focus on the weirdness of the mysterious suitcase,
meanwhile, the perpetrators of the hoax laugh all the way to the bank.’
“Who would do
something like this?" Canterbury asked.
“Some reporter
with low morals and a very large imagination. There've been many cases of this—like
the Great Moon Hoax of 1835.”
“So, what do the
parents stand to gain from this?" Christie looked at Agent Donald, who was
already shaking his head.
“The mother’s
uncle is a highly respected Cardinal in the Catholic Church. He even christened
the baby—fifteen years ago." Donald looked at Harry. “So, highly unlikely
the parents dreamed this up.”
“No, no. This
is a perfect example of relativity!" Einstein shouted. “This young lady
has somehow found a spot where she was able to go as fast as light. To her,
time became as less real as the food she was serving her doll.”
“An anomaly
like that, someone would have seen something." Canterbury said. “Were
there any witnesses to her disappearance?”
“Nothing. Other
kids were playing in the neighborhood. No flash of light, no loud sound. Nothing.”
“I agree with
Mr. Blackstone. I believe this is a scam. Just one pulled upon the family."
Miss Christie said, looking back over her notebook. “Someone kidnapped and
murdered their daughter. Then took her place. Back some years ago, I was
introduced, through an article, to hypopituitarism. This rare disease can make its
victims resemble children. Cutting and dying the hair, using lenses to change
the color of the eye…”
“But why?"
Agent Donald asked.
“Money. Maybe
they are delusional. Or, as Edgar Allen Poe knew, sometimes the best motive is revenge.” She chuckled a bit. “I thought
of using the idea for a story once myself. Maybe one day I will.”
“According to
all who know the family, they're well liked. And, while they have members of
the family who have importance, they aren’t wealthy. It’s probable, but highly
unlikely.”
“Can I speak
with her?" Dr. Canterbury asked, looking through the window.
“Sure." Donald
responded.
Canterbury
approached the table where the young girl was still sitting, the suitcase
parked neatly beside her. She looked up at the man, who had put his pipe away. He
sat down across from her.
“Is it tea
time?”
“Silly. Nobody drinks tea.”
“Ah. I’m sorry.
What are we drinking?”
“Espresso.”
“And to eat?”
“Oysters
Rockefeller. They're Daddy’s favorite.”
“Very fancy
party here.”
“Are you going
to ask me about it?”
“Ask you about
what?”
“The stuff. All
anyone wants to talk to me about. They ask me everything--what I saw, what I
heard. That’s all they want to know about me.”
“Not me." Dr.
Canterbury leaned a little bit closer. “I want to ask you, why are you not
playing with Mr. Potato Head?”
“That’s a baby
toy. I played with mine until I was seven." She smiled. “Don’t tell
anyone.”
“I won’t. I bet
you’re smart.”
“Got the best
grades in my class.”
“Heard your Mom
and Dad talk about the President, right?”
“I watch the
news. Momma likes me to read the paper too. Says it builds vocabulary.”
“Well, let’s
see how smart you are. Who is the President?”
“That’s easy. President
Dewey.”
After chatting for
a few more minutes, Canterbury walked back to the others, a wide smile on his face.
“How did she
get the President wrong?” Blackstone said.
“She didn’t."
Canterbury replied. “I also know who owns the suitcase.”
“Who?" Agatha
asked.
“Her father.”
“But, her
father said he he'd never seen it before." Agatha's brows furrowed.
“Yes, the man
you interviewed hadn’t. But her real father has.”
The other four
looked puzzled before Albert spoke. “I think you should make more clear what
you're thinking.”
“Simple. I
think that, in a way, you were all right. Blackstone, the suitcase was misdirection. But only to us. It
wasn’t placed here to distract us—but we chose to let it. Albert, there was an anomaly. But not here. And, Miss
Christie, big fan by the way, I don’t think this is OUR Mr. and Mrs. Robinson’s child.”
“Our?" The
four asked in unison.
Agent Donald
waited on his answer.
“Yes. To borrow
a term from Professor Einstein—it’s relativity. Say time is like walking along a path. Suddenly, the path splits into
three. You stay on the center path. But, let’s say a version of you chooses
another.”
“A version of
you?" Agatha scribbled away again, obviously being inspired.
“Yes. time and space are relative. But what if something else is as well? What if, every time you make a choice,
another dimension forms? What if reality is relative to time and space? Making it possible to travel between
realities.”
“Interesting,” Einstein
said, rubbing his moustache.
“If reality is
also relative, then we have to assume there are other realities out there. That’s
why this Anna believes Thomas Dewey won the 48 election. Because—in her reality—he
did.”
“And how is the
suitcase misdirection?" Blackstone asked, eagerly awaiting someone to
prove him correct.
“Easy. Say, in that reality, Anna’s father is a
scientist. Say he is working on a dimensional theory, such as myself. Say he
found a way to poke a hole between the two dimensions, the two realities. Like
I said before—there was an anomaly, just not on our side. He was trying to send
this suitcase—this battered and
beaten suitcase across the borders. And, by accident, he sent Anna as well.”
Agent Donald
folded his arms across his chest. “This is too wild to believe.”
“Yes. She could
have lied about the election. She could have lied about the suitcase. But why
would she lie about Mr. Potato Head?”
“I’m not
following…" Donald responded.
“Mr. Potato
Head is a new toy. Just bought one of the firsts for my nephew two years ago. How
could she have played with it up to when she was seven?”
“So, what
happened to Anna? Our Anna?" Einstein
asked quietly.
“Who
knows? Maybe she was murdered. Maybe she
ran away. Maybe, if realities are tied together, she was taken to the other one.
But, it is my belief that the girl in there is not the Anna from this dimension.”
“Sounds a bit
too much like science-fiction for me,” Miss Christie responded. Blackstone just
chuckled.
***
Agent Donald
escorted Dr. Jonas Canterbury to a room after the others had left. Donald
opened the door, and closed it as Jonas entered. He stayed outside. As soon as
Jonas walked in, he saw the figure sitting at the desk. He couldn’t believe it.
***
“You have a
very interesting theory on our little Anna out there.”
“It’s the only
one that makes sense." Jonas responded, pulling out his pipe.
“Well, I’d like
to offer you a job. New division. Part of the National Security Agency.”
“I thought they
were all about code breaking and communications?”
“Don't you
think communicating with another dimension would fall into their area of
expertise?”
“I don’t know.”
“Well, I think
you should look over what I’m offering you." He held out a small folder. Jonas
smiled.
“All the same,
I’d rather stay at the University, Mr. President.”
“Please, call
me Harry.”
***
Two weeks
later, Agent Donald presented his report to his superiors. He walked into the
office, and looked at the panel around him. He sat down, and gently set his
case on the table in front of him. After popping the latches, he pulled out a
folder containing the contents of the incredible reappearing girl.
“Your
findings?”
“Many theories.
Only theories. No definite proof of anything." He walked over to the main
desk and handed the folder to the chief. “Still, the process was entertaining.”
“And your
report?”
“Tells
everything. The greatest collections of minds couldn’t solve this mystery. But,
they all had theories." He walked back to the table, but paused. The words
of his Commander-In-Chief resounded in his head…the words he was told after
Jonas had left. He turned back and said, “All but Dr. Canterbury.”
The case that
sat on the table would have recognized the lie, if it could have noticed
anything. It was, after all, just a suitcase.
But Donald, who had kept it after they sent
Anna back home, thought it was something more. A suitcase that never was.
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Josh, this is absolutely like nothing you've ever written AND I AM IN LOVE WITH IT. I think there's nothing you can't write well, honestly. This is incredible.
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Jules
This is freaking amazing.
ReplyDeleteChynna-Blue
This is fantastic, as usual! Loved it!
ReplyDelete-Megan Paasch
Love, love, love. Seriously, I adore this.
ReplyDeleteAwesome story, Josh! Love it!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story! I really enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteDamn Hews - this is ridiculous. I love it! Awesome.
ReplyDeleteThe best part about participating in a series like this is getting to read amazing work by my friends.
ReplyDeleteWell done Joshy :)
Traveling between dimensions? Oh you know I'm eating this up Josh! I love Canterbury's insanely clever "reveal." So freakin' creative. AWESOME piece.
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