Should I keep it?
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I remember this from the GUTGAA, but I'll have to go back and read your entry again to compare them. (Sorry, there were hundreds of queries and first 150, as you already know)
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Personally, I really enjoyed your original chapter...although I can see the difficulty with getting across what your actual story is when you can only post 150/250 words. I know you are putting the "blurbs" above each chapter, the only thing I'm not sure of...what are they for? Are they something she is writing for school? Also, I was kind of surprised how much she was gushing over Aidan based on how adamantly she was against the whole fairy tales and prince thing. I almost got from the blurb that she's anti-romance completely. Yet, she couldn't even talk straight (at all) around him. But I guess that is the whole point you are going for...that she doesn't even see it in herself? (ps...I don't know if it was just issues with flipping it over or what, but something seemed off near the end, repeating lines, then slightly changed and repeat again.)
ReplyDeleteBottom line....I like it..and think you should keep it.
BTW...I don't mean "what are they for" as in why are you doing it....I just mean...what is SHE doing them for (ie work, school, journal...etc...but I think it is school from what is on top...but she just seemed older than school age to me...but is she an adult student?) Guess I'd know if I read more! LOL =)
ReplyDeleteSee...this is the issue. It almost needs something else to explain the point of the essays. The essays come from when she is a senior in school. The narrative is when she is twenty-five. And yes, the whole point is fairy tales are such a part of her, she fails to see she is living one. The essays serve kind of as a foil to her character. What she critiques, she will the do.
ReplyDeleteI prefer this beginning. I do agree that it could be confusing when they only ask for the first 150.
ReplyDeleteTo be honest, the essays read like HS writing, while her current life reads the maturity of a twenty something. I enjoy the contrast.
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